I think this film is one of the best films I’ve seen, this is a tragedy, all we can do is only thinking and thinking,but if we really want to change the society, it could be a long, long way to go!
楼主我就帮你改改这最后一段把。不然我怕光给你建议不帮你改又要有人说我站着说话不腰疼。
I think this film is one of the best films i've never seen, it's a tragedy, all we can do is keep thinking and thinking (do + is 后面用动词原形，你要用thinking的话就加个keep。但是这里实在没看懂你用thinking想表达什么意思)，but if we really want to change the society, we still get a long way to go (其实这里根据你上下文的意思你甚至可以说it's a misson impossible, it's a Penelope's work， 等等 )
Post by teafortwo
I think this film is one of the best films i've never seen, it's a tragedy, all we can do is keep thinking and thinking
I think this is the one of the best films I have ever seen,,, all we can do is to keep thinking. 句子写得很罗嗦. 1小时只要写这么点? 我英语课考试, 一刻钟要写篇关于战犯的东西, 长度和你这个差不多. LZ观点不错, 结构上不算很清晰, 当然只要老师说OK就可以了. 估计是别的法国同学写得太糟糕了.
我水平太差，写成never了。 all I have to do is 后面加的我记得是动词原形，有一首歌dream里面唱 all I have to do, is dream .... dream dream dream ... 我当时还挺小，不懂为什么dream前不加to， 结果朋友告诉我就是这么用， 所以我印象很深。 emilie 能确认是要加to 么。这样我也能学到东西啦。
Post by Léon_Ou
这位学长,如果我有不足之处还请您指点,但请慎用,这句话,而且,你说的,你不觉得很打消别人的积极性吗?By the way,u can't always critique or even judge the others' job like that, I really hope u can see it?
And, if I've got some mistakes in my written E...
See ur point. Wish u continued success in ur language study.
I think this film is one of the best films I’ve seen, this is a tragedy, all we can do is only thinking and thinking,but if we really want to change the society, it could be a long, long way to go!
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I thought <Fight Club> is one of the best films I've ever seen, which could somehow be a tragedy.
We can do nothing but thinking it over and over. The way should be tough enough if we really want make some change to this world.
Post by lokken
I think this film is one of the best films I’ve seen, this is a tragedy, all we can do is only thinking and thinking,but if we really want to change the society, it could...
u might disagree, but it seems to me that the "which" clause here may cause some sort of ambiguity like "FC is one of the best films..." is a tragedy. just for the sake of clarity, i would write: FC, somehow a tragedy, is one of the best films i've seen.
ouf, perhaps I misunderstood that phrase. For me, I thought the author might consider that the <FC> was so spectacular that this kind of films appears really rare in the Hollywoods.
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