亲爱的们，法语翻译一首歌哈，我一会试试英文哈

西经90

我姑且翻之，大家姑且看之，有问题大家讨论，现在偶唯一的期望就是看到法文版的，各位高手出招吧，不要翻成歌词形式，就口语就好
最近心情不差，觉得法语进步不小，还是多亏了各位论坛里亲爱的你们哈
you forgot all your promises when she tries to steal you from me

you wanted me to choose the way of loving you when she raised her flag of vitory

you ever said that you'd make me feel secure ,be tender and never be hard on me

yet you tried to avoid of seeing me ,ignoring of my preoccupied mind

I was told being in love is like flying a kite ,more you mind it ,the easier you'd feel frustrated

but they forgot to tell me that
Love without a limit could also have left you undone

I dont deserve to be the last one knowing we were over

i dont cried 'cause i didnt own you anything when it comes to love

I dont deserve knowing you hold someone tight when i still in love with you

i cant do this anymore ,need to get through all these storms
i'd rather to leave you than giving myself a hard time in love

[ 本帖最后由 西经90 于 2008-11-21 15:54 编辑 ]

西经90

能翻一句是一句啊，等待法语中！！

西经90

Apylana

you forgot all your promises when she TRIED to steal you from me

you wanted me to choose the way of loving you when she raised her flag of VICTORY www.revefrance.com

you ever said that you WOULD make me feel secure , THAT YOU WOULD be tender INSTEAD OF BEING hard TO me www.revefrance.com

yet you tried to   avoid of seeing me SHY AWAY FROM ME ,ignoring my preoccupied mind 。。。？？？？

I was told THAT being in love is like flying a kite , THE more you mind ,the MORE you feel frustrated

but they forgot to tell me that  Love without a limit could also have left you undone...???rf_024_:

I dont deserve to be the last one knowing we were over  KANBUXIAQULE

i dont cried 'cause i didnt own you anything when it comes to love www.revefrance.com

I dont deserve knowing you hold someone tight when i still in love with you

i cant do this anymore ,need to get through all these storms
i'd rather to leave you than giving myself a hard time in lovewww.revefrance.com

Apylana

seems a little bit chinglish...
several pieces of advice...
1. pay attention to accordance of tense
2. do not translate that DIRECTLY, and do not rely too much on the electronic dictonary...  
3  take your time coz it does take some time...

西经90

i did it in 5 mins and I can give you my words never once i checked a dictionary ,the only reason i translated words by words is Im really into the lyrics ,didnt wanna changed alot ,well ,thanks anyway
maybe i should ask a yankee to correct it before i post here ?

[ 本帖最后由 西经90 于 2008-11-22 00:33 编辑 ]

Apylana

good 4 urf_017_:

西经90

谢谢楼上，学习学习

miam

原帖由 Apylana 于 2008-11-21 23:00 发表
seems a little bit chinglish...
several pieces of advice...
1. pay attention to accordance of tense
2. do not translate that DIRECTLY, and do not rely too much on the electronic dictonary...  
3  tak ...

hear hear. if sth is worth doing, it's worth doing well. if sth is unworthy to do, why bother to do it?

西经90

As matter of fact ,we spend huge time on doing the things unworthy to do ,we got kick out of it ,im no perfectionist,and the reason why i threw such a thread here is i was bored ,and i wish people could get what i mean in the first place

miam

原帖由 西经90 于 2008-11-24 23:22 发表
As matter of fact ,we spend huge time on doing the things unworthy to do ,we got kick out of it ,im no perfectionist,and the reason why i threw such a thread here is i was bored ,and i wish people cou ...

by we you mean you and your kind who spend a lot time doing unworthy stuff and enjoy？

well, some people might see it the same way as you. But not me. I don't spend much time doing what I think is worthless. the reason is very simple: if sth is thought of as unworthy to do, and you still spend time on it, it's not a matter of fact, but a waste of time, to be distinguished with killing time. one may do unworthy things as a way to kill time, I can't rule out such a possiblity, esp. when one gets way too much free time on hand and finds no worthy thing to do. but since doing unworthy stuff equals a waste of time, it's hard for me to imagine in what way one could possibly taking pleasure in squandering his time. like sb shouts with joy: Man, I just wasted five minutes doing some worthless stuff. It was awesome!!  

西经90

that depends on how you look it , Life is a lot like making soup,after adding all necessary ingredients ,it might look like soup just what you want ,during this time ,you were too hurry to add pepper or salt,which might not be the essential stuff in the soup but would definitely  make a difference ,when I mentioned we spend alot time to do unworthy things ,just try not to undertand it litterally,I spend un hour in front of tv ,which means nothing to you ,or even i didnt get anything useful ,i just let my brain take a break ,unworthy ,hmm,i dont really think so . the benevolent see benevolence and the wise see wisdom,some people try to be saddhu,others try to be hedonistic,je m'en fiche en fait ,ne vuex pas etre trop coincee ,lol