麻烦帮忙修改一下推荐信了~~感激不尽

Alexandremaimai

The mature, patient and honest student is full of imagination and do have a capacity for abstract reasoning and analytical thinking.

雅歌

第一段形容词太多，没有量化指标，例如前5% 前10% 一类的。best这种词要靠数据来支持。这个也是整体的毛病，堆砌形容词而缺少细节。

Although he didn’t get a very nice result in the chemistry competition held on 13th September, 这个有必要写么？

The mature, patient and honest student is full of imagination and do have a capacity for abstract reasoning and analytical thinking. 没看懂。。。或者说看懂了，不过。。。

He used to be the leader of the school’s Table Tennis Club, which is one of the best clubs in our school. He is also good at table tennis and has won the first prize in a table tennis competition held in our school together with other two students in his class. 这逻辑有问题吧，是先打的好才当leader的吧，干嘛反过来？再说体育运动不是为了说明你体育多么nb，而是为了说明你的一些品质

So I would like to support him firmly in his quest of recommendation. Your kind consideration will be greatly appreciated. 这个我觉得力度还可以继续加强。你可以上网搜搜推荐信的技巧和陷阱，学学里面的词语

这里有两篇http://ggene.cn/html/research/other/2009/0827/2763.html
http://www.scien***.cn/blog/user_content.aspx?id=233652

还有就是英语，最后找英国人或者美国人改改吧，以推荐信应有的水平读起来还是差点儿。没仔细看语法，大体上差不多，细节让老外把关吧。
不过还是赞一下lz的英语，很不错～

加油～

雅歌

http://www.science n e t. cn/blog/user_content.aspx?id=233652
第二篇网址被屏蔽了，lz把上面的空格去掉就行了
或者看这个http://limiao.net/?p=1302&cp=3

雅歌

对了，开头人称要把女士放前面～

mecboy

对了，开头人称要把女士放前面～
雅歌 发表于 2009-10-25 10:51

我一直都以为是这样，但后来听一个女朋友说，有的时候是男的在前面
可能大家都比较客气吧

mecboy

RecommendationDear Sir or Madam:

I take great pleasure in recommending Zongzhen to your collage.

I was his chemistry teacher during year 2007~2010. He was admitted to our school through an entranc ...
zzzz4559 发表于 2009-10-25 08:31

为什*么insa的要英语推荐信啊

简单~~平凡

自己写推荐信啊~~~

那还不写的再好点儿~~~一不做,二不休,三不悔,484

狂往好里写,使劲儿!必须使劲儿!